看我新的短文改错.Drunk driving had been the leading cause of the road accidents in China. Every year, many people lose their life due to&_百度作业帮
看我新的短文改错.Drunk driving had been the leading cause of the road accidents in China. Every year, many people lose their life due to&
看我新的短文改错.Drunk driving had been the leading cause of the road accidents in China. Every year, many people lose their life due to it. Some people believe that drinking little does no harm to their driving. In fact, drunk driving is ofvery dangerous to both our society and drivers. It's time that wetake tough measures to deal with it. Firstly, we should make efforts to raising people's awareness to wards safety.Secondly,the government should punish drunk drivers severn by law.Only on this way can people pay enough attenion to our daily driving.Whether we can keep on doing like this,the road accidents will decrease soon in the future.
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1.to改为with
2.is改为was
3.travel改为travelling
4.had前加a
5.what改为how
6.him改为her
7.about 改为that 或去掉about
8.strangely改为strange 9 正确 10.too改为so
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