请大神帮忙看下下面的英文，帮忙纠正下初中语法时态态等错误。

来源：蜘蛛抓取(WebSpider) 时间：2016-09-04 10:41 标签： 高中英语语法时态
求大神帮我修改下英文复试自我介绍,主要是语法,时态等,看看有没有错误,联系后发文章给您.
英台wan281
发到我帮你看看
已发送，谢谢
已经改了，查收下
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扫描下载二维码请求英语专业的老师、大神们指点一下，帮在下看一下下边的中英文对照有哪些语法错误。。谢谢了！_百度知道求大神帮忙修改一下这段英文翻译的语法错误_百度知道外教老师考试叫我们改错下礼拜交请英语大神帮忙咯,语法,单词等等错误都指出来哦3~5处错误原文：I would prefer to work in a large company rather than a small one.A large company has more to offer in terms of advancement,training,and prestige.In a large company,I can start at an entry-level position and work myself up to the top.I could start in the mailroom and,once I know the company,can apply for a managerial position.In a small company,there is not as much room to grow.In a large company,there are a variety of jobs.I could be trained in a variety of positions and would have valuable experience.In a small company,there would not be the same opportunity.In a large company,there would be more prestige.I could brag to my friends that I worked for one of the biggest companies in the world.I would always have something to talk about when I met strangers.If I worked in a small company,I would always have to explain what the company did.Working for a small company would not give me the same opportunities for advancement or no-the-job training as working for a larger company would.Nor would I be as proud to work for a small company---unless the small company was my own.
I would prefer to work (应该是working) in a large company rather than a small one. A large company has more to offer in terms of advancement, training, and prestige.In a large company, I can start at an entry-level position and work myself up to the top.
I could start in the mailroom and, once I know the company, (少主语I)can apply for a managerial position. In a small company, there is not as much room to grow.In a large company, there are a variety of jobs（这段病句比较严重可以简单改为there is not as much room as in a large company with a variety of jobs）.
I could be trained in a variety of positions and would have valuable experience. In a small company, there would not be the same opportunity. In a large company, there would be more prestige(整句话表达很差可以改为A large company is often more prestigious).
I could brag to my friends that I worked(这里开始用虚拟是可以的) for one of the biggest companies in the world. I would always have something to talk about when I met strangers. If I worked in a small company, I would always have to explain what the company did.Working for a small company would not give me the same opportunities for advancement or no-the-job training as working for a larger company would（去掉多余的would）.
Nor would I be as（as后面没有比较对象去掉多余的as） proud to work(改为of working) for a small company---unless the small company was my own. 希望对你有所帮助.如满意请点击下面的“选为满意答案”按钮,谢谢您!
谢了！那句表达很差的也不改也是没错的吧
不改，意思是有偏差的。因为也可以理解为在大公司里面有声望，而不是作为大公司员工可以炫耀。
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