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　　Xian Xinghai is one of the great composers of classical and traditional music．He was born in Macao, China in 1905 and studied in Paris later．During Anti-Japanese War, he came back to our motherland, and he wrote The Yellow River in 1939 in only six days．The music describes China’s coming to the rest of the world, and his songs have been popular for more than sixty years．
　　Unfortunately, he died young, in 1945．However, he is called the People’s musician and Chinese people love and miss him forever．
请在这里输入关键词：书面表达(10分)根据以下提示，写一篇80字左右的短文。Lisa是印度一个贫困家庭的孩子。过去她们家很穷，她_百度知道
书面表达(10分)根据以下提示，写一篇80字左右的短文。Lisa是印度一个贫困家庭的孩子。过去她们家很穷，她
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Lisa is an Indian poor child. They were very poor in the past, and she had no money to go to school. So she had to work on the farm all day, she could neither read nor write. She wished she could go to school! One day , a staff of the
UNCIFE came to her village. After learning about her condition, the staff gave her money and afforded her to go to school. Now Lisa studies at school, and she can read and write. She wants to be a staff of the
UNCIFE when she grows up, and help more poor children.
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Lisa在UNCIFE的工作人员的资助下会读也会写的故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： Lisa is......
；They were.....； she had to ......；
the staff gave......；She wants to...... 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要把提纲的内容表达完整。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Lisa的过去，接下来介绍在UNCIFE的工作人员的资助下，她能去上学，最后指出她希望长大后，帮助更多的贫穷孩子。此处用了 in the past，all day, learning about，afforded her to ，wants to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
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I have many friends，应注意动词的形式，因为英语最忌讳重复；最后，要尽量利用上所给的提示内容、lives、is，在完成句子是应特别注意动词的单三形式，是介绍一个朋友王飞；其次，表达时应使句型顺畅并符合英语的习惯表达方法，尽量少用排比句. Bob think math is very interesting，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯. Mary likes Chinese because her father is Chinese：在写书面表达时首先要注意的问题就是人称；再次, and they have different favorite subjects. E. because he likes doing sports：本书面表达. Jack likes art best because he likes drawing pictures a lot。在写作时。所以本文的人称应该是第三人称.
试题分析，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句，如has . Her father teaches her Chinese at home. She loves China very much。注意连词的运用，不能混淆人称（如本题就要用第三人称）. He is a computer fan, so he likes math best. He likes playing computer games very much, and she wants to know more about China、likes等。点评，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式（本题要注意单三形式）. David likes P, and he is good at playing it. John’s favorite subject is computer because he thinks computer can help him a lot in his study. He is good at playing basketball and soccer……
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根据提示,以”Life in China”为题写一篇70字左右的短文. 1. 我是美国人,名叫Tom.
2. 现住在阳光城.这是个现代化的城镇,乘地铁去市中心只要10分钟.空气污染少, && 是居住的好地方.
3. 我在北京阳光中学上学,这儿的老师和同学都很友好,并且乐于助人.
4. 我参观过中国的许多地方.很喜欢美味可口的中餐.
5. 我觉得这儿的生活非常快乐.
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&&& I am an American.My name is Tom.Now I live in Sunshine Town.It is a modern town.It is only 10 minutes to the city center by underground.There's less air pollution here.So it's a wonderful place to live.I study in Beijing Sunshine Secondary School.The teachers and students here are friendly and helpful.I visited many places in China.I like Chinese food very much.It is very delicious.I think the life is very happy.答案不唯一
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注意：1.词数：80个左右；
2.开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Tina,
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