更多公众号：mentoreducationMENTOR专业教育平台最新文章对这篇文章不满意？您可以继续搜索：百度：搜狗：感谢您阅读雅思写作【犯罪类考题】4大考点解析，近年真题回顾+推荐观点思路，本文可能来自网络，如果侵犯了您的相关权益，请联系管理员。QQ:求写一篇英语作文what a clean city
What a Clean CityBeijing,the capital city of China,is my dream city since my childhood.Last June,fortunately,I had the opportunity to go to Beijing.What impressed me most was not only how large the city is but also how organized it is.Being such a large city,there are so many tall buildings and various nice cars in the street,as well as crowded people all over the city.However,to my surprise,all these make up a city that is so clean and beautiful.The streets are so clean that there isn't any garbage in it,the sky is so blue without clouds,and even the toilets are clean and even fragrant.I am so impressed by Beijing.Morever,I will never forget citizens of Beijing who have so high moral awareness to maintain the cleanness of the city.
为您推荐：
其他类似问题
My city is
Beautiful and clean.The road is long and wide at the waterside.
Social life of information technology and economic globalization, the growing importance of English. English as one of the most important information carriers, in all areas of human life has become th...
/Portugal/newslist.asp?id=195稍微修改一下就OK了
扫描下载二维码编辑点评：原北京雅思学校总校首席写作主讲，雅思界元老级名师，轻松雅思英语俱乐部创始人新书《轻松雅思Clean&Clear写作法》现已已上市。本书的内容侧重从三个方面提高考生的写作能力。
轻松雅思Clean&Clear写作法
本书的内容侧重从三个方面提高考生的写作能力：
1.第一个方面就是培养考生写作的逻辑性。
很多考生在写作时完全是随性地想到什么就写什么，结果造成写出来的句子前言不搭后语，跳跃性 太强，让人读起来似懂非懂。针对这个问题，我设计了Clean & Clear写作法，建议考生在清晰的结 &构上写出有关联性、条理性的句子来解释论证自己的观点。这里的Clean代表的就是结构，Clear代 表的就是逻辑。
2.第二个方面就是教会考生使用不同的论证方式来拓展主体段落。
在教学中，我发现很多考生都有一个集中的问题&&主题段拓展方式单一，延伸性差，往往就只能写三句话：一句写&论点&，一句写&因为&，一句写&所以&。其实除了用这种典型的&因果论证&来自圆其说之外，我们还可以通过比较、对比、举例，假设等方式来论证自己的观点，甚至还可以将其中两种论证方式混合使用。掌握了不同的论证方式，你的思路会更加开阔，这时你会觉得雅思写作又为你打开了一扇通向胜利的大门，这也是为什么我把Chapter 4称之为&进阶时刻&。
3.最后一个方面在于范文。
很多考生都有这样一种感觉：Native speakers写得范文地道，但不好模仿。国内老师写得好模仿，但总觉得不够地道。为了解决这个尴尬的现象，本书为考生专门定制了一批范文。所有范文首先力求八字原则：文从字顺，逻辑通达。
这样的范文考生学起来容易上手。在现在众多雅思写作书中，有些范文作者为了显示自身水平故意写得生难拗口，结果让考生读起来觉得晦涩难懂，且学习价值并不大。其次，本书中无论&老中&写得范文，还是&老外&写得范文，都是完全按照雅思写作官方的评分标准书写，并结合了本书的写作方法，在保证了语言应用正确的三重标准下设计出来的（这里尤其要提到大连理工出版社的校对和质检体制，保证了此书语言方面的高质量，他们要求作者的错误率为四万字不超过两处错误），所以考生们可以安全放心地使用，无毒无害且环保。至于词汇、句型和思路，希望考生们带着一颗探索发现的心在阅读范文的同时勾画出适合自己的内容，最终&私有化&。
作者简介-唐志云
原北京雅思学校总校首席写作主讲，雅思界元老级名师，轻松雅思英语俱乐部创始人。6岁时在身为外交官的爷爷奶奶影响下开始接触英语，并由此对语言学习产生了浓厚的兴趣。从2003年至今，已有10年北京高端英语培训学校教学经历，亦师亦友，桃李满天下。授课逻辑清晰，诙谐幽默，深受学员喜爱。曾应邀在京城各大院校进行英语学习公益讲座以及老师培训。在雅思写作方面提出了适合中国考生的八字写作原则：文从字顺，逻辑通达。
他经常说：自己连做恶梦都没想过会当老师，当他所有的老师和同学在听说他当了老师后，都以为是自己刚刚做了个恶梦。作为一个从小极端调皮、叛逆，长大重情重义、仗义执言，还有点儿愤青的人来说，能够如此热爱英语培训这个行业，确实让他和他的小伙伴儿们都惊呆了！
写作的复习之道很简单：搭出好逻辑；写出采分点；量化有效练习。这本书，是一本用最简单步骤实现真正提分目标的创新大作。
你只看到他台上将雅思写作每道题的思路摆弄得像异草良木，却没看到他在台下为了准备它们每天闻鸡起舞。你羡慕他像个巫师总能赶上雅思写作出题者的脚步，却没有看到他别无选择心在滴血不得不与它们朝夕相处。你说他总能将每个雅思写作加分句型hold住，他觉得这是一个雅思写作老师对考试应有的态度。你说他给的雅思写作核心词汇用起来贼拉酷，他会说这才是你应该走的路。你嘲笑他不好意思宣传自己是一种迂腐，他向来对这种讥讽不屑一顾。雅思写作是一段轻松而快乐的旅途，纵使曾被考官鄙视侮辱，纵然热血不在心却狂怒，他也有信心让你别把下一只鸭子烤糊。
Chapter 1 了解雅思写作&游戏规则&：从写给&大鹏&同学的信开始&
Chapter 2 议论文学习&高速通道&
2.1 通用议论文的组成和特点(The argumentative essay)
2.2 议论文常用术语
2.3 表达正负能量的标志性词汇
2.4 &雅思文艺青年&应有的&学术范儿&句型
2.5 让你在1分钟内完成谋篇布局的思维方式
Chapter 3 核心竞争力：Task 2之Clean & Clear写作法
3.1 Clean & Clear写作法介绍
3.2 什么是Clean & Clear写作法？
3.3 Clean & Clear写作法应用
Chapter 4 开头段和中间段进阶时刻&&Task 2目标：7.0
4.1 最自然的开头方式
4.2 中间段拓展之惑
4.3 中间段拓展之因果论证
4.4 中间段拓展之举例论证
4.5 中间段拓展之比较和对比论证
4.6 中间段拓展之假设论证
Chapter 5 Task 2地道范文及解析
5.1 教育类
5.2 文化类
5.3 社会类
5.4 科技类
5.5 政府类
5.6 环境与健康
5.7 女性话题
5.8 犯罪类话题
5.9 媒体类话题
Chapter 6 &模板姐&的逆袭&&最具教育意义的雅思博文
&博客完全记录&模板姐&最终丢弃模版救赎自己的雅思故事（总分7.0）
Chapter 7 雅思写作议论文必备功能词汇
Chapter 8 助你一臂之力的图表题&&Task 1目标：8.0
8.1 图表题必备知识
8.2 曲线图：时间造就趋势
8.3 柱状图：横纵两种有区别
8.4 表格题：&大佬和小弟&的对比
8.5 饼图：不仅仅是百分比
8.6 流程图就像&学做饭&
8.7 地图题就是玩儿&找茬儿&
Chapter 9 Task 1 高分范文大补丁
Chapter 10 G类书信写作
10.1 书信格式与称呼
10.2 书信目的与语气
10.3 书信写作分段
10.4 G类书信范文
& 雅思写作答题纸（The answer sheet）
雅思议论文真题回忆&
注：本文内容节选于《轻松雅思Clean&Clear写作法》一书。本书由出版，沪江英语授权转载部分内容。打开微信扫一扫
孔网客户端
安卓版苹果版扫描下载
孔夫子旧书网
该图书已经找不到了, 还有其他店铺销售此图书。
Copyright(C)
孔夫子旧书网
京ICP证041501号
海淀分局备案编号当前位置： >
雅思写作考试命题规律解析--犯罪类
很多参加过雅思考试的人都知道，犯罪类写作话题也是写作备考必须复习的内容。2016年雅思考试已经出现过相关的考题，所以还是要引起重视的。&犯罪话题&的重中之重是关于&青少年犯罪&的，还是先一起看一下近些年主要考了哪些内容吧!文末有彩蛋，我不会告诉你是话题语料库哦~
近年真题回放
刚刚进行的一场雅思考试(日)雅思作文2题目如下：
A 14-year-old young who seriously damaged school was made to clean streets as a punishment. Do you think young criminals should be sent to prison or there are alternative forms of punishment?
该题属于&犯罪&类作文题目，在雅思考试里屡见不鲜，唐老雅在各类写作授课和讲座中都多次提及该类话题。以下是近5年雅思考过的&犯罪&类作文题目：
Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?
People are afraid to leave their homes for fear of crimes. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes while others think that little could be done. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How to punish them?
Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Other believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the sme way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In most countries,prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people areafraid to leave home because of crimes. Some believe that more action should betaken to prevent crimes, but others feel little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays many individuals in our society behave in an anti-social way such as committing crimes. What are the causes of this? Who should take responsibility for dealing with it?
The government should control the amount of violence in films and ontelevision in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the world children and teenages are committing more crimes,what are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?
如果将日计算在内，年&犯罪类&话题共出现了13次，考点及分布如下：
1. 青少年犯罪，共出现6次。包括：(1)青少年犯罪的原因及其解决办法;(2)青少年犯罪是否应该与成年人犯罪一样得到惩罚;(3)青少年犯罪后是否该收监，或者有其他的惩罚形式?
2. 一般犯罪的原因及解决办法，共3次。包括：(1)人们犯罪的原因是什么?(2)犯罪是环境使然还是天性使然?
3. 一般犯罪的解决办法，共3次。包括：(1)犯罪能否避免?(2)避免犯罪，最好的办法是将犯人收监还是对人们实施教育?
4. 其他，共1次。出狱后的犯人能否成为教育青少年避免犯罪的典范?
一般认为，&犯罪&类话题比较难写，因为其中可能涉及到教育，法律，道德等相关词汇，对于烤鸭来说可能太难了。但是，唐老雅在多种场合都讲过，雅思写作的秘诀就在于化繁为简，四两拨千斤，再难的话题都能找到一个比较容易的出口，找到适合考生英语水平的内容。记住：千万不要以自己轻微的英语水平去碰沉重的写作内容，那样你一定会头破血流，死得很难看。
话题相关词汇与表达
commit a crime 犯罪
criminal 罪犯
victim 受害者
violate the law 违法
consequence 后果
juvenile crime 青少年犯罪
youngster 年轻人
teenager 青少年
punishment 惩罚(n.)
capital punishment 死刑
life imprisonment 无期徒刑;终身监禁
law-abiding citizens 守法的公民
crime (murder, theft,robbery, bribery, etc)
很多参加过雅思考试的人都知道，犯罪类写作话题也是写作备考必须复习的内容。2016年雅思考试已经出现过相关的考题，所以还是要引起重视的。&犯罪话题&的重中之重是关于&青少年犯罪&的，还是先一起看一下近些年主要考了哪些内容吧!文末有彩蛋，我不会告诉你是话题语料库哦~
近年真题回放
刚刚进行的一场雅思考试(日)雅思作文2题目如下：
A 14-year-old young who seriously damaged school was made to clean streets as a punishment. Do you think young criminals should be sent to prison or there are alternative forms of punishment?
该题属于&犯罪&类作文题目，在雅思考试里屡见不鲜，唐老雅在各类写作授课和讲座中都多次提及该类话题。以下是近5年雅思考过的&犯罪&类作文题目：
Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?
People are afraid to leave their homes for fear of crimes. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes while others think that little could be done. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How to punish them?
Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Other believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the sme way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In most countries,prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people areafraid to leave home because of crimes. Some believe that more action should betaken to prevent crimes, but others feel little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays many individuals in our society behave in an anti-social way such as committing crimes. What are the causes of this? Who should take responsibility for dealing with it?
The government should control the amount of violence in films and ontelevision in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the world children and teenages are committing more crimes,what are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?
如果将日计算在内，年&犯罪类&话题共出现了13次，考点及分布如下：
1. 青少年犯罪，共出现6次。包括：(1)青少年犯罪的原因及其解决办法;(2)青少年犯罪是否应该与成年人犯罪一样得到惩罚;(3)青少年犯罪后是否该收监，或者有其他的惩罚形式?
2. 一般犯罪的原因及解决办法，共3次。包括：(1)人们犯罪的原因是什么?(2)犯罪是环境使然还是天性使然?
3. 一般犯罪的解决办法，共3次。包括：(1)犯罪能否避免?(2)避免犯罪，最好的办法是将犯人收监还是对人们实施教育?
4. 其他，共1次。出狱后的犯人能否成为教育青少年避免犯罪的典范?
一般认为，&犯罪&类话题比较难写，因为其中可能涉及到教育，法律，道德等相关词汇，对于烤鸭来说可能太难了。但是，唐老雅在多种场合都讲过，雅思写作的秘诀就在于化繁为简，四两拨千斤，再难的话题都能找到一个比较容易的出口，找到适合考生英语水平的内容。记住：千万不要以自己轻微的英语水平去碰沉重的写作内容，那样你一定会头破血流，死得很难看。
话题相关词汇与表达
commit a crime 犯罪
criminal 罪犯
victim 受害者
violate the law 违法
consequence 后果
juvenile crime 青少年犯罪
youngster 年轻人
teenager 青少年
punishment 惩罚(n.)
capital punishment 死刑
life imprisonment 无期徒刑;终身监禁
law-abiding citizens 守法的公民
crime (murder, theft,robbery, bribery, etc)
你可能也喜欢这些