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新东方名师：2015高考英语作文点评及详细解析
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作者：李辉
　　各位考生好，2015高考答案将在考后第一时间更新，新东方网高考名师针对2015高考试卷也做了深入的点评和解析，各位考生可登录查看2015各地高考试卷答案及点评解析。
　　2015年高考英语考试刚刚结束，新东方在线名师第一时间为大家带来全国新课标I卷高考英语作文点评及详细解析。
　　今年全国新课标I卷高考英语作文的题目为：假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
　　一、要点如下：
　　1、栏目介绍；
　　2、稿件内容
　　3、稿件长度：约400字
　　4、交稿日期：6月28日前
　　2015全国新课标I卷的英语作文题目，我们可以看出是李辉老师反复讲过的书信作文。对于书信作文我们就强调两点，简单&通用。需要注意书信作文三段论，把中间段的要点部分用出彩的过渡词做链接，就能写出漂亮的文章。
　　二、写作提纲
　　根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：
　　第一段：问候+写信背景（我校办杂志）+写信目的（套用十大书信之“求助信“写法）
　　第二段：主题句+拓展句1（介绍外国生活）+拓展句2（介绍外国节日）+拓展句3（不少于400字）+拓展句4（6.28前交）
　　第三段：我希望（你能帮助我）。我相信（大家会喜欢你的文章）。感谢你（读我的信）。请回信！
　　三、李辉老师名师范文
　　Dear Peter,
　　How are you doing? （问候）Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life.（写信背景+白银裤衩+八大万能利） As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. （写信目的）
　　Here are some details about it. （经典主题句）To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. （简单句+白银裤衩）Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. （简单句+平行并列结构+白银裤衩+八大万能利）What’s more, your article should be at least 400 words.（简单句，不用升级，以便“长短结合”） Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th, so that it can be published in time. （求助信套话+白银裤衩）
　　Hopefully, you could do me the favor.（六大结尾句之一） I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. （六大结尾句之二）Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.（书信必备结尾句） I’m looking forward to your reply and your article.（书信必备结尾句）
　　Best wishes,
　　Yours,
　　以上就是新东方在线高考英语名师李辉关于2015高考新课标1英语大作文的点评及详细解析，我们也会在后续继续为广大考生第一时间带来其他科目的名师权威解读，希望大家持续关注。最后，新东方在线祝愿广大2015高考考生取得优异成绩，金榜题名。并祝2016高考考生备考顺利。
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Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same. But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an industry. Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit! My dream is to want to have a folk life! I want it to become a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent American? Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments. Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time. You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will. If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid.翻译：每个人都有自己的梦想,我也一样.但是我的梦想不是律师,不是医生,不是演员,甚至不是一种行业!我的梦想也许大人们会觉得可笑,但是,这是我一直追寻的!我的梦想是想要自己有一个七彩的人生!我要它成为一幅美丽的画,它不但要有鲜明的颜色,也要有暗淡的颜色,我不排除这幅画有一部分的黑色,我反而会很珍惜这些暗淡的颜色!不是吗,试问一下,一幅色彩鲜艳的画,如果不加一点暗淡的颜色,又怎能更突出它的美呢?人生就象画一样,画中鲜艳的颜色就代表着人生美丽快乐的时光.画中暗淡的颜色就代表着人生遭遇困难,不愉快的时候.也许你会觉得拥有一条平坦美丽的路不是很好吗,但我并不觉得.一个人如果一生平坦那有什么意思呢?人生只有短短几十年,我要他走到最后时,每一个回忆都事充实的! A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever. A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends. However I only have one best friend and it's XXX. He is the same age as me. He is taller than me. Basketball is his favourite sport. We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever 翻译：朋友是当你在沮丧消沉的时候能给你温暖的人.因此我又很多朋友.XXX是我最好的朋友.他和我一样大却比我高.他最喜欢的运动是打篮球.我们是同班同学.他的学习很棒,因此他的成绩很好.我们相互学习相互帮助.我有困难的时候他会帮我,而他又困难我也会尽力帮他.我希望我们的友谊能天长地久.My best friend and I get along with each other quite well. But we are so different. He is funnier, more outgoing than I am and i'm more serious. He is more athletic and likes to play all kinds of sports but I am smarter on study. My friend is wilder than me and I am calmer. He is tall, thin, strong,with short hair, And sometimes he is very careless and lazy. On the other hands, I am short, fat, weak, with shorthair. He is very helpful because I am very lazy and don't want to do any sports. And I will help him with his study. I think our friendship will last forever. 翻译：我和我最好的朋友相处的非常好,但是我们却各有不同.他比我更有趣,更外向,而我很严肃.他是运动型的,各种体育运动都很喜欢,而我更擅长于学习.我的朋友相对狂野而我相对沉静.他又高又瘦,但是很结实,留着短发.一些时候他马虎又懒散.与他相比,我显得矮胖,而虚弱.我也是短头发.他很乐于助人,因为我很懒不想做仍和运动.我会在学习上帮助他.我希望我们的友谊能够持续到永远Today, good sunny weather, always a hundred flowers ... ...' I head swimming glasses, I sing a little song, walked meteor big, went to Zhoushan Middle School swimming pool.
Wow thiazolyl! Today, many people can really ah! A group of three students, five pile, in the pool, pushing and shoving, no better happy!
I already have lost Hing son, traveling light. 'Thump!' I caught a spring, water ducks to water generally swim a ... . Nice to feel the water! I have a moment like a free fish fry for a while yet also seemed a carefree birds. Sometimes wildly breaststroke frog forward, sometimes into freestyle, rolls toward the deep water. I kept the swinging hands, feet not live playing the water splashes like a bit graceful girl, and like one a lovely boy, beautiful great!
I jumped up, roll forward. 'Wow!' The water was cold and deep water, thrilled! 'Crash .' my original' Deep Somersault 'began. I pushed the hands, feet Yi Deng, jumped backward, turn sideways for a more perfect performance ah! I am in the midst of cheers, air to drill into the water. At this time, the students are coming to my swim. Suddenly, the pool open swim posture: breaststroke, butterfly, dog plane, everything. Overtake each other, with each side. Laughter, playfulness sound into a .
Tired, I lay quietly on the water: If water every day as partners, so the fish do my friend, my teacher, my job is only swimming . it was nice to ah!
When the sun sets, my classmates and I still play pool slapstick. Finally, the shore, and the evening's setting sun dragging our very, very long shadow. Happy swimming, I like! 翻译：“今天天气好晴朗,处处百花香……”我头顶游泳眼镜,口哼小曲,迈着流星大步,向舟山中学游泳池走去.
哇噻!今天人可真多啊!学生们三个一群,五个一堆,在泳池里推推搡搡,好不快活!
我早已耐不住兴子,轻装上阵.“扑通!”我纵身一跃,如水鸭子一般去水里畅游了…….水里的感觉真好!我一会儿像一条自由自在的小鱼,一会儿又似一只无忧无虑的水鸟.时而青蛙似地蛙泳前进,时而自由泳进,向着深水区进发.我的双手不停着摆动着,两脚不住地打着水,溅起的水花如一位位婀娜多姿的少女,又像一个个活泼可爱的男孩,美丽极了!
我跳跃着,翻滚着.“哇!”深水区的水好凉、好爽!“哗啦.”我的独创“深水空翻”开始了.我双手一推,两脚一蹬,向后一跃,侧身一转,多完美的表演啊!我在一片喝彩声中,神气地钻入水里.这时,同学们都向我游了过来.顿时,泳池里游姿开放：蛙泳、蝶泳、狗刨、应有尽有.你追我赶,互不相让.欢笑声、嬉闹声响成一片.
累了,我静静地躺在水面上：要是天天与水为伴,让鱼儿做我的朋友,当我的老师,我的作业只有游泳.那该多好啊!
夕阳西下时,我和同学们还在泳池里嬉戏打闹.终于,上岸了,黄昏的残阳把我们的影子拖得很长很长.快乐的游泳,我喜欢! I love my family,because I have a happy family.
My father is an English teacher.His name is Jacky.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.What’s my mother jop?Is she a teacher?Yes,you’re right!My mother is very kind and nice,she is thirty-seven.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents!
On Staurday and Sunday,I often go to the library and play the piano,My father go to play basketball.Sometimes,we watch TV and listen to music at home.
I love my family.Because I’m very happy to live with my parents together!
我爱我的家庭,因为我有一个快乐的家庭.
我的爸爸是一名英语教师,他的名字叫Jacky.他今年38岁.他非常喜欢打篮球.我的妈妈是赶什么呢?她是一名教师吗?是的.你说对了!我的妈妈是一个很亲切、友善的人,她今年37岁.我妈妈总是勤劳的干活.我爱我的父母.
在星期六和星期天里,我经常去图书馆和弹钢琴.我爸爸去打篮球.有时侯,我们都在家看电视和听音乐.
我爱我家.因为我和爸爸妈妈一起生活得很开心!I what busied one day, the body that dragging exhaustion sits silently on the balcony to syare blankly, come stealthily towards evening, late wind slowly had blown, left the cool trace of filar silk. But the balcony that also cannot bake sun broil hair is very hotly is wrapped cool. Dark, bird is less and less also, the damage that a string of bird left in the sky cries. The sun that worked one day also took off coverall, it is no longer in that way dazzling. The tender broadness that the sun that changes new clothes also changes is elegant, lovely. Tell the truth the sun can be met really choose color. The clothes that you see her wear is much more beautiful, red is blaze that one the most beautiful one color in the layer. Withered and yellow is squashy orange just was picked on the tree that orange is yellow. Foil in so beautiful color the cheek that issued arch to give a piece of peaceful. She seems to be being monitored by others same, stealthily move is moving pace, appear that kind is lightsome. Knowing at this moment is who is make a practical joke, in her that is high and scatter on luxuriant clothes went up prepared Chinese ink makes her dress becomes bit more full of stains or spots, ased if to throw one Jiao in wallow. Right now she is like a girl bashful and same, blush so that resemble squashy persimmon. Perhaps she feels embarrassed to used white gauze cloak to live then half face. Passed for ages, perhaps be she feels to be done so also of no help cowardly cowardly ground comes out to appear that kind is bashful. Then she thinks 36 plan -- go for the best thing to do, be smooth! Apparent its speed appears than a moment ago much faster, she is floating die of small blush Pang is in then later hilltop. The sky appears deserted. Again scan widely hopes horizon appeared again her form, hey! How be like two different people with foregoing the setting sun, move close to again look, it is the moon that Yin Guangshan shows so. Dark, appear soundless in that way all around.
翻译：忙碌了一天的我,拖着疲劳的身体静静的坐在阳台上发呆,傍晚悄悄来临,晚风缓缓的吹过,留下了丝丝的凉意.但也不能将太阳炙烤得发烫的阳台裹凉.天黑了,鸟儿也愈来愈少,天空中留下了一串鸟的残鸣.
工作了一天的太阳也脱下了工作服,不再是那样刺眼.换上新装的太阳也变的温柔阔雅,楚楚动人.说实话太阳可真会挑颜色.你看她穿的衣服多漂亮,红的是火焰那一层一层中最美的颜色.枯黄的是树上刚摘下来熟透的桔子那桔黄.在这样美丽的颜色衬托下拱出了一张恬静的脸蛋.她好像被别人监视着一样,悄悄的挪移着步伐,显得那般轻盈.
这时不知道是谁在搞恶作剧,在她那高贵而又华丽的衣裳上撒上了墨汁使她的衣服变得斑斑点点,仿佛在泥坑里摔了一跤.此时她好像一个小姑娘害羞一样,脸红得象熟透的柿子.也许她觉得难堪于是便用白纱遮掩住了一半脸.过了好久,也许是她觉得这样做也无济于事便怯怯地出来显得那般羞涩.于是她便想三十六计——走为上策,溜!显然它的速度显得比刚才快多了,之后她那泛着微红脸庞消逝在山头.天空则显得空荡荡的.再放眼一望天际又出现了她的身影,哎!怎么跟先前的夕阳判若两人,再凑近一看,原来是银光闪闪的月亮.
天黑了,四周则显得那样静悄悄.I have a goodfriend,He is a boy,he has a very nice name—Robert.He comes from England.He has big eyes,they are round and cute.He comes to China with his parents.We know each other since last year.From then on,we become goodfriends.At weekends,we often get together to play basketball,he plays it very well,and,he sings well,too.He teaches me English and I teach him Chinese.We are goodfriends forever.翻译：我有一个好朋友,他是一个男孩,他有一个非常好听的名字—罗伯特.他来自英格兰,他有一对大眼睛,它们很圆很可爱.他和他的父母一起来中国.我们从去年开始认识.从那时候起,我们成为好朋友了.在周末,我们经常一起打篮球,他打得非常好,而且,他歌唱得很好听.他教我英语然后我教他中文.我们永远都是好朋友.My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.====我的家乡 我的家乡是个美丽的地方,它座落在一条宽宽的小河旁边,富产鱼和大米. 但是在过去它是个又穷又偏僻的小镇.很多人没有工作,生活很难过. 1949年解放以来,我的家乡发生了很大的变化.道路拓宽了,工厂、学校、医院、电影院和歌剧院一个接一个建成.人们生活质量大大地提高了. 我爱我的家乡,更爱家乡的人们.他们辛勤工作保持着它的富有、美丽.
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一封求助信(A Letter for Help)
Dear Uncle,
　　How are you?
　　Next week an English speaking contest will be held in the city. A classmate of mine and I will take part in it on behalf of my school. I am excited but also mervous, because it is a good chance to improve my English. But I have no experience. Although I have been preparing for the contest, I am still not confident. As an expert in English, what would you advise me to prepare for the contest?
　　I plan to pay a visit to you this Saturday morning. I wonder whether you will be free then. If not, could you tell me the time that is convenient for you? I am eager to get your instruction. I will appreciate any of your help.
　　Your niece,
　　Yang Mei
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　　A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with friends, or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”
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　　I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree. Though I know Mum is the most important person in my world, I just can not do what she likes me to do. It seems that I quite often stay away from my dear mum in playing my phone, sleeping, hanging out with my friend, or just shutting out my mum in my room.
　　Having read about the above common complaint from so many mothers, I feel ashamed and guilty. From now on, I shall try my best to stay with my dear parents as often as possible. I must confess we young generation must realize that our parents care for us as well as hoping to share what we have been doing with them.
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