在one一个里面怎么通过一些句子来收到那篇赞美文章写得好的句子啊?就是这样?这个怎么弄啊?很急的!在等!!!

文章结尾的三个比喻句
文章结尾的三个比喻句
范文一:文章的结尾:技巧一:首尾呼应,凸显主旨(首)都说生活的船不能没有理想的帆,都说生活的理想就是为了理想的生活,而理想的生活中最快乐的时光,便是梦想的花季。(尾)花季中,我希望自己能永远记住先哲的那句良训:生活的船不能没有理想的帆。生活的理想就是为了理想的生活。《把梦想带给花季》)技巧点拨:首尾呼应是考场作文中最实用的方法之一,一般情况是作者先在开头提出文章的中心,然后在结尾时再次强调,照应开头,从而使文章的中心鲜明突出。你看,在上例中,小作者运用首尾呼应的方式,以优美的诗一般的语言凸显了文章的主旨——理想的生活中最快乐的时光,便是梦想的花季。(首)有一种光华,笼罩着中华民族的精神家园;有一种火苗,跃动在民族灵魂的奥林匹克山上;有一种烈焰,温暖了绵远的文明情思,那就是友善!
(尾)我们不能因为屡受伤害就失去与丑恶斗争的信心,因为我们需要守卫我们的精神火种——友善!《守卫精神的火种》)技巧点拨:这是一篇考场议论文的开头与结尾,与上例相比,此例为简洁明快,开头提出论点,迅速入题,结尾再次反复,呼应开头,加强了论证的力度。技巧二:言为心声,呼唤号召让我们大家行动起来吧,把爱心带给他人,带给那些失学儿童,带给那些孤寡老人,,,,带给身边的每一个人。当你把爱心献给他人时,你也获得了莫大的幸福。要相信,只要人人都献出一份爱,世界将变成美好的人间。《把爱心带给他人》)二十一世纪,我们是祖国的春天,我们不是我们的父母,热情奔放是我们的性格,我们不需要守那些规矩,打破陈规,让我们脑中的那团热情火燃烧得更猛烈,把我们的笑声、爱心串在一起,让全世界笼罩在爱之中。要笑就笑个痛痛快快,要哭就哭个歇斯底里,不要压抑自己,不要让那陈旧的观念束缚着,不要随便改变自己,请记住我的名言:“我就是我,给我一点阳光就这么灿烂。”《给一点阳光就这么灿烂》)技巧点拨:考场作文讲究情感真挚,要写出自己对真善美的呼唤,对假丑恶的鞭挞。这种情感不仅局限于自己,还可以在文章结尾发出真挚的呼唤,号召大家一起去追寻真善美,一起去鞭挞假丑恶。上面小作者真情呼唤,言为心声,表现了自己美好未来的向往之情。第二段小作者言词急切,个性十足,表情达意毫无遮掩,向所有的同龄人发出了真情的呼唤,有力的突出了主题,给读者以强烈的心灵震憾。技巧三:巧妙发问,引入深思自然的色、自然的香、自然的味、自然的美,这一切都源于自然。自然是伟大的。是神奇的。它与生活是那么的近,那么的紧。品味自然,不就同品味生活了吗?技巧点拨:一篇好的文章做到言有尽而意无穷,要具有哲理启发性。如同欣赏一支优美的乐曲,曲虽终但余音缭绕,给人留下无穷的韵昧。你看,在上面一段文字中,作者在结尾巧妙发问,引发读者思考,将文章的意蕴加以深化。体现出作者思考的深刻性与独特性。不同的话有不同的影响,不同的角度有不同的视野,不同的哈哈镜有不同的成像,不同的心情会有不同的行动,不同的花有不同的花香和样子,不同的评价造就孩子不同的命运。何必要让自己狭小的视角不公地评价一个人、伤害一个人,何必要熄灭风中的烛光,何必要让所有的孩子都成为一个模子里刻出来的无个性的模型?《哈哈镜中的我》)技巧点拨:这段结尾针对老师的评语表达了自己的看法,先用排比句的形式说明每一个学生都有自己的个性,老师不必磨灭学生个性,最后再以问句结束,启示人们进行思考,深化了文章的内涵。技巧四:引用佳句,多姿多彩“野芳发而幽香,佳木秀而繁阴,风霜高洁,水落而石出”,15年来,生活让我懂得了放弃!为了我的理想,为了更多的人可以读书,我必须放弃!《从天空想到的》)想到这里,我又记起了一位名人说过的一句话:“身边的书多着呢,只要发觉,肯定会学到很多,,,,”《阅读身边的人》)明日歌中说:“明日复明日,明日何其多,我生待明日,万事成蹉跎,,,,”希望大家能把握今天,创造出美好的明天。《创造美好的明天》)佐拉说:“人生——只有两分半种的时间,一分种微笑、一分种叹息、半分种的爱,,,,”在我看来,在我陶醉于欣赏母亲的梳妆中,那一分钟的微笑不是勉强,那一分钟的叹息之后不再是叹息,而是爱的传递,母亲将她对生命的爱,对生活的爱,对亲人的爱融于平日的点滴中,我忘情天其中了,,,,(《陶醉》)
技巧点拨:古今中外,名言佳句很多,作文结尾之时,若能巧妙引用,定能使文章增色许多。这里列举几例分别引用了诗文佳句、名人言论,既增添了文采又加深了文章的意境。效果很好,同学们应加以学习,此外,引用的范围可大些,如俗语、谚语、流行歌词等均可引用。技巧五:抒情议论,气势不凡其实宁静就是那么简单,一个浅浅的微笑,一句贴心的话语,一颗能包含一切的心灵,足以使一张紧绷的脸松弛开来,让笑容在人们脸上轻轻地绽开,那笑容就如徜徉在天边的云朵,轻轻地点缀着那片蔚蓝的天,清新而自然,《从天空想到的》)春光似海,青春如花。青春是美丽的,美丽的青春在于奋斗,在于拼搏。愿天下的人们都能让自己的青春绽放出花一样的馨香!《花样年华》)技巧点拨:这两段文字发于心,出于情,运用排比、比喻修辞,以优美的文字抒发内心真实情感,并配以适当的议论,使文章结尾气势不凡,强劲有力。
技巧六:景物烘托,情景合一风停了,暴雨也结束了,太阳重新露出了笑容,两代人的那扇玻璃也被那片残阳熔化了。太阳在远处逐渐隐去,消失在一片晚霞中,两者混为一体,没有距离。《雨中品读》)技巧点拨:这段结尾的特点十分突出,景物烘托的作用也很明显,小作者通过对雨后景物的描写暗示了两代人之间情感隔阂的消失,情与景有机地结合在了一起。含蓄隽永。余味无穷。此刻,一缕阳光从外面射进病房,我感到自已真像一棵受伤的小树沐浴着它。呵,成长的路上,虽然风云莫测,但是阳光毕竟很好!我想。《在阳光下成长》)
技巧点拨:这段结尾突出阳光的作用,将阳光与成长结合在一起,暗示自己成长道路虽不平坦但充满阳光,表达出一种乐观向上的情绪。既照应了主旨,又显得情韵深厚。原文地址:文章的结尾:技巧一:首尾呼应,凸显主旨(首)都说生活的船不能没有理想的帆,都说生活的理想就是为了理想的生活,而理想的生活中最快乐的时光,便是梦想的花季。(尾)花季中,我希望自己能永远记住先哲的那句良训:生活的船不能没有理想的帆。生活的理想就是为了理想的生活。《把梦想带给花季》)技巧点拨:首尾呼应是考场作文中最实用的方法之一,一般情况是作者先在开头提出文章的中心,然后在结尾时再次强调,照应开头,从而使文章的中心鲜明突出。你看,在上例中,小作者运用首尾呼应的方式,以优美的诗一般的语言凸显了文章的主旨——理想的生活中最快乐的时光,便是梦想的花季。(首)有一种光华,笼罩着中华民族的精神家园;有一种火苗,跃动在民族灵魂的奥林匹克山上;有一种烈焰,温暖了绵远的文明情思,那就是友善!
(尾)我们不能因为屡受伤害就失去与丑恶斗争的信心,因为我们需要守卫我们的精神火种——友善!《守卫精神的火种》)技巧点拨:这是一篇考场议论文的开头与结尾,与上例相比,此例为简洁明快,开头提出论点,迅速入题,结尾再次反复,呼应开头,加强了论证的力度。技巧二:言为心声,呼唤号召让我们大家行动起来吧,把爱心带给他人,带给那些失学儿童,带给那些孤寡老人,,,,带给身边的每一个人。当你把爱心献给他人时,你也获得了莫大的幸福。要相信,只要人人都献出一份爱,世界将变成美好的人间。《把爱心带给他人》)二十一世纪,我们是祖国的春天,我们不是我们的父母,热情奔放是我们的性格,我们不需要守那些规矩,打破陈规,让我们脑中的那团热情火燃烧得更猛烈,把我们的笑声、爱心串在一起,让全世界笼罩在爱之中。要笑就笑个痛痛快快,要哭就哭个歇斯底里,不要压抑自己,不要让那陈旧的观念束缚着,不要随便改变自己,请记住我的名言:“我就是我,给我一点阳光就这么灿烂。”《给一点阳光就这么灿烂》)技巧点拨:考场作文讲究情感真挚,要写出自己对真善美的呼唤,对假丑恶的鞭挞。这种情感不仅局限于自己,还可以在文章结尾发出真挚的呼唤,号召大家一起去追寻真善美,一起去鞭挞假丑恶。上面小作者真情呼唤,言为心声,表现了自己美好未来的向往之情。第二段小作者言词急切,个性十足,表情达意毫无遮掩,向所有的同龄人发出了真情的呼唤,有力的突出了主题,给读者以强烈的心灵震憾。技巧三:巧妙发问,引入深思自然的色、自然的香、自然的味、自然的美,这一切都源于自然。自然是伟大的。是神奇的。它与生活是那么的近,那么的紧。品味自然,不就同品味生活了吗?技巧点拨:一篇好的文章做到言有尽而意无穷,要具有哲理启发性。如同欣赏一支优美的乐曲,曲虽终但余音缭绕,给人留下无穷的韵昧。你看,在上面一段文字中,作者在结尾巧妙发问,引发读者思考,将文章的意蕴加以深化。体现出作者思考的深刻性与独特性。不同的话有不同的影响,不同的角度有不同的视野,不同的哈哈镜有不同的成像,不同的心情会有不同的行动,不同的花有不同的花香和样子,不同的评价造就孩子不同的命运。何必要让自己狭小的视角不公地评价一个人、伤害一个人,何必要熄灭风中的烛光,何必要让所有的孩子都成为一个模子里刻出来的无个性的模型?《哈哈镜中的我》)技巧点拨:这段结尾针对老师的评语表达了自己的看法,先用排比句的形式说明每一个学生都有自己的个性,老师不必磨灭学生个性,最后再以问句结束,启示人们进行思考,深化了文章的内涵。技巧四:引用佳句,多姿多彩“野芳发而幽香,佳木秀而繁阴,风霜高洁,水落而石出”,15年来,生活让我懂得了放弃!为了我的理想,为了更多的人可以读书,我必须放弃!《从天空想到的》)想到这里,我又记起了一位名人说过的一句话:“身边的书多着呢,只要发觉,肯定会学到很多,,,,”《阅读身边的人》)明日歌中说:“明日复明日,明日何其多,我生待明日,万事成蹉跎,,,,”希望大家能把握今天,创造出美好的明天。《创造美好的明天》)佐拉说:“人生——只有两分半种的时间,一分种微笑、一分种叹息、半分种的爱,,,,”在我看来,在我陶醉于欣赏母亲的梳妆中,那一分钟的微笑不是勉强,那一分钟的叹息之后不再是叹息,而是爱的传递,母亲将她对生命的爱,对生活的爱,对亲人的爱融于平日的点滴中,我忘情天其中了,,,,(《陶醉》)
技巧点拨:古今中外,名言佳句很多,作文结尾之时,若能巧妙引用,定能使文章增色许多。这里列举几例分别引用了诗文佳句、名人言论,既增添了文采又加深了文章的意境。效果很好,同学们应加以学习,此外,引用的范围可大些,如俗语、谚语、流行歌词等均可引用。技巧五:抒情议论,气势不凡其实宁静就是那么简单,一个浅浅的微笑,一句贴心的话语,一颗能包含一切的心灵,足以使一张紧绷的脸松弛开来,让笑容在人们脸上轻轻地绽开,那笑容就如徜徉在天边的云朵,轻轻地点缀着那片蔚蓝的天,清新而自然,《从天空想到的》)春光似海,青春如花。青春是美丽的,美丽的青春在于奋斗,在于拼搏。愿天下的人们都能让自己的青春绽放出花一样的馨香!《花样年华》)技巧点拨:这两段文字发于心,出于情,运用排比、比喻修辞,以优美的文字抒发内心真实情感,并配以适当的议论,使文章结尾气势不凡,强劲有力。
技巧六:景物烘托,情景合一风停了,暴雨也结束了,太阳重新露出了笑容,两代人的那扇玻璃也被那片残阳熔化了。太阳在远处逐渐隐去,消失在一片晚霞中,两者混为一体,没有距离。《雨中品读》)技巧点拨:这段结尾的特点十分突出,景物烘托的作用也很明显,小作者通过对雨后景物的描写暗示了两代人之间情感隔阂的消失,情与景有机地结合在了一起。含蓄隽永。余味无穷。此刻,一缕阳光从外面射进病房,我感到自已真像一棵受伤的小树沐浴着它。呵,成长的路上,虽然风云莫测,但是阳光毕竟很好!我想。《在阳光下成长》)
技巧点拨:这段结尾突出阳光的作用,将阳光与成长结合在一起,暗示自己成长道路虽不平坦但充满阳光,表达出一种乐观向上的情绪。既照应了主旨,又显得情韵深厚。
范文二:文章结尾的重要性不亚于开头,常见的结尾方法有以下几种:一、
画龙点睛,点明主题在文章的结尾处凝聚全篇内涵写出点睛之笔,点明主旨,突出主题,使读者更加了解和明白作者写作的意图。1、
我至今仍然在沉思之际想起那一片柔媚的湖水,不知湖畔那群种子中有哪一颗成了小树,至少,我知道有一颗已经成长。那颗种子曾遇见一片土地,在一个过客的心之峡谷里,蔚然成荫,教会她怎样敬畏生命。(《敬畏生命》)2、
常常提醒自己注意幸福,就像在寒冷的日子里经常看见太阳,心就不知不觉暖洋洋,亮光光。(《提醒幸福》)二、
首尾相助,呼应全篇结尾和开头相互呼应,既使文章的结构趋于完美,又使文章的主题得以明确。1、
我不由得停住了脚步。(开头)在这浅紫色的光辉和浅紫色的芳香中,我不觉加快了脚步。(结尾)(《紫藤萝瀑布》)2、
他落榜了!一千二百年前。榜纸那么大那么长,然而,就是没有他的名字。啊!
竟单单容不下他的名字“张继”两个字。(开头)一千二百年过去了,那长长的榜单上(就是张继挤不进去的那张金榜)曾经出现过的状元是谁?哈!谁管他是谁?真正被记得的名字是“落第者张继”。有人会记得那一届状元披红游街的盛景吗?不!我们只记得秋夜的客船上那个失意的游人,以及他那场不朽的失眠。(结尾)(《不朽的失眠》)三、
总结全文,概括文意用精炼的语言对文章作一个概括性的结尾,总结全文,使读者对文章有一个清晰而完整的认识。1、总结八十年的奋斗历程和基本经验,展望新世纪的艰巨任务和光明前途,我们党要继续站在时代前列,带领人民前进,归结起来,就是必须始终代表中国先进生产力的发展要求,代表中国先进文化的前进方向,代表中国最广大人民的根本利益。(《中国共产党八十年的奋斗业绩和基本经验》)2、总之,我认为,他们所遭受的人类很大一部分悲苦都是由于他们对事物的价值作出错误的估价而造成的,都是为他们的哨子付出了很大的代价。(《哨子》)四、
含蓄凝练,言有尽而意无穷文章的主题,作者没有正面说出,结尾促使读者掩卷深思,通过自己的分析加深对文章的理解。1、这时,一江春水在我心头轻轻地荡漾了一下。在白蝴蝶危难时我怜悯它,可是当它真的自由翱翔而去时我又感到如此失落、怅惘。“唉!人啊人,,,,”我默默伫望了一阵,转身向青草地走去。(《白蝴蝶之恋》)2、我望着这群充满朝气的哈尼小姑娘和那洁白的梨花,不由得想起了一句诗:“驿路梨花处处开”。(《驿路梨花》)五、
戛然而止,发人深思有的文章到后面词意俱尽,水到渠成,便戛然而止,以不结为结。这样的结尾,干净、利落,但又并不给人以不完整的感觉。1、它走了上去,消失在一片灿烂中。(《斑羚飞渡》)2、过了一会儿,由圆形队的先端开始拉长伸直,速变成竖线,停止上升。从排头依次掉头向北,敏捷地变为一缕长长的细丝,加快速度,一路向北飞去。(《鹤群翔空》)六、
展望未来,寄深写远有的文章临到结尾,又转出一层新意,提出新问题,引导和启发读者向新的方向思考。1、我在朦胧中,眼前展开一片海边碧绿的沙地来,上面深蓝的天空中挂着一轮金黄的圆月。我想,希望是本无所谓有,无所谓无的。这正如地上的路,其实地上本没有路,走的人多了,也便成了路。
(《故乡》)2、八月的一天早晨,杜小康打开鸭栏,让鸭们走到水中时,他突然在草里看到一颗白色的东西。他惊喜地跑过去捡起,然后朝窝棚大叫:“蛋!爸!鸭蛋!鸭下蛋了!”杜雍和从儿子手中接过还有点温热的蛋,嘴里不住地说:“下蛋了,下蛋了,,,,”(《孤独之旅》)写好文章的结尾应注意要有整体观念,不可为结尾而结尾或虎头蛇尾,使结尾变了样子成了无用的东西。故古人把好的文章结尾称为“豹尾”,足见结尾在一篇文章中的力度和重要性。如范仲淹的《岳阳楼记》总写了洞庭湖全景后,以“览物之情,得无异乎”引出两种天气登楼的不同心情,作结时以“予尝求古仁人之心,或异二者之为,何哉?不以物喜,不以己悲;,,,,其必曰:‘先天下之忧而忧,后天下之乐而乐’乎”与前文遥相呼应,将叙述原由、写景抒情,自然收束为议论明志、勉人策己,,以其不同反响的结尾总揽全局,高屋建瓴,造就了千古名篇,其博大的思想内涵也如黄钟大吕一般警策后人。写好文章的结尾应注意要言不烦,以少胜多,切忌拖泥带水,啰嗦拉杂。如鲁迅的杂文《论雷峰塔的倒掉》在叙述了吴越民间传说,雷峰塔已倒掉而法海禅师仍躲在蟹壳里不得出来后,用了“活该”两字结尾,简洁有力,字字千鈞,胜过千言万语,淋漓尽致地嘲笑了法海禅师罪有应得的结果和表达出对雷峰塔倒掉的欢欣,堪称结尾简洁的典范。再如《鞠躬尽瘁》在记叙了焦裕禄带病坚持工作,终于被病魔夺去了生命后,用“那一年,他才四十一岁”一句结尾,语言极其简洁,但对焦裕禄的赞扬惋惜之情却溢于言表,令人掩卷沉思不已。写好文章的结尾还应注意尽量出新,不落俗套。如:1、,,,,我的母亲很高大,然而很瘦,自然不算重;儿子虽然很胖,毕竟幼小,自然也轻;但我和妻子都是慢慢地、稳稳地,走得很仔细,好像我背上的同她背上的加起来,就是整个世界。
(《散步》)2、过了一阵之后,作家又觉得自己并未改行,原来创作同摆渡一样,目的都是把人渡到前面的彼岸去。
(《摆渡》)例1由散步的生活小事生发出了中年人的社会责任重大,“好像我背上的同她背上的加起来,就是整个世界”, 结尾增添了内涵,显得厚重而有新意。例2由渡河写起,当作家思考了人生含义,当了摆渡人之后,彻底明白了一个道理:“原来创作同摆渡一样,目的都是把人渡到前面的彼岸去”,这样就把作家的任务和作用形象化地揭示了出来,独特新颖,令人回味无穷。一样的开头,可以有百样的结尾,文章结尾的形式是多种多样的。要想写好文章的结尾,除了基本的文字功底外,还要根据文章思想内容的需要,灵活巧妙地选用适当的方法,尽可能在写作过程中使结尾既符合文意,又能创新并显现出个性特色。
范文三:高三英语作文万能结尾句1、结尾万能公式一:如此结论说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难更多过渡短语:to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型:Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2、结尾万能公式二:如此建议如果说这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型:Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
范文四:掌门1对1教育 高中英语高三英语作文万能结尾句1、结尾万能公式一:如此结论说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个"总而言之"之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难"显而见之",但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!更多过渡短语:to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型:Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2、结尾万能公式二:如此建议如果说"如此结论"是结尾最没用的废话,那么"如此建议"应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型:Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
范文五:英语写作中很绝的结尾句!让写作提高不止一个档次...1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________.3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.16. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.17. All in all, we cannot live without ______________ . But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.18. Whatever you do, please remember the saying- ______________. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.19. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.20. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.23. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.28. It is high time that ______________. Here are some of the measures that might betaken immediately. 29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is ______________. Still another one is ______________.31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________. But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ______________.36. We all know the story of ______________. this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.37. My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ______________. As an old saying goes, ______________.38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.40. From the graph it is evident that ______________.41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________. And I believe that ______________.42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.43. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.46. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.49. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.52. On the one hand, it has helped china ______________. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.55. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.56. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s more, ______________.57. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________. For me, ______________.六级写作25个加分句型一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)
例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的优点是...)例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create (produce) any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...)
例句:So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。十一、The + ~er + S + V,~~~the + ~er + S + V ~~~The + more + Adj + S + V,~~~the + more + Adj + S + V~~~(愈...愈...)例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力,你愈进步。The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...,..能够..)例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..)例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是...的时候了)例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。十六、Those who ~~~ (...的人...)例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不...)例句:There is no one but longs to go to college.没有人不渴望上大学。 十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don’t like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来,...一直...)
例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)例句:It pays to help others.帮助别人是值得的。二十四、be based on (以...为基础)例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。英语写作常用句型(一)段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some
people suggest that ____.2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,
它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying______. Its the experience of ourforefathers,however,it is correct in many cases eventoday.3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;
其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily
life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse isthat______.4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______because ______. Besides,______.5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不
利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it
has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看
来,……People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.
Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becomingmore and more serious.8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。______ has become a hot topic among people,especiallyamong the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许
多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。______ has been playing an increasingly important role in
our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot ofbenefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可
以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in
the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______
while. Obviously,______,but why?(二)中间段落句1. 相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。
On the contrary,there are some people in favor of ___.At
the same time,they say____.2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的
是……。But I dont think it is a very good way to solve ____.For
example,____.Worst of all,___.3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。
首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……______is necessary and important to our countrysdevelopment and construction. First,______.Whatsmore, _____.Most important of all,______.4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。There are several measures for us to adopt. First, wecan______5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方
面……,另一方面,Confronted with______,we should take a series of effective
measures to______. For one thing,______For another,______6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定
会……。It is high time that something was done about it. Forexample. _____.In addition. _____.All these measureswill certainly______.7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因
是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于……Why______? The first reason is that ______.The secondreason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the
main cause of ______due to ______.8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。However, just like everything has both its good and bad
sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as
______.9. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantage
范文六:英语写作中很绝的结尾句!让写作提高不止一个档次。分享作者:噢 已被分享13次 评论(0) 复制链接 分享 转载 举报1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________.3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.16. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.17. All in all, we cannot live without ______________ . But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.18. Whatever you do, please remember the saying- ______________. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.19. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.20. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.23. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.28. It is high time that ______________. Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately. 29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is ______________. Still another one is ______________.31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________. But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ______________.36. We all know the story of ______________. this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.37. My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ______________. As an old saying goes, ______________.38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.40. From the graph it is evident that ______________.41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________. And I believe that ______________.42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.43. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.46. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.49. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.52. On the one hand, it has helped china ______________. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.55. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.56. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s more, ______________.57. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________. For me,英语写作中很绝的结尾句!让写作提高不止一个档次。分享作者:噢 已被分享13次 评论(0) 复制链接 分享 转载 举报1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________.3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.16. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.17. All in all, we cannot live without ______________ . But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.18. Whatever you do, please remember the saying- ______________. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.19. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.20. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.23. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.28. It is high time that ______________. Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately. 29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is ______________. Still another one is ______________.31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________. But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ______________.36. We all know the story of ______________. this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.37. My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ______________. As an old saying goes, ______________.38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.40. From the graph it is evident that ______________.41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________. And I believe that ______________.42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.43. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.46. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.49. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.52. On the one hand, it has helped china ______________. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.55. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.56. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s more, ______________.57. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________. For me,
范文七:第十三章:作文结尾技巧古人在谈到结尾时常以“豹尾”为标准,是指结尾时笔法要简结、明快、干净利落,犹如豹尾劲扫,响亮有力,给读者以咀嚼回味的余地。一、自然收束水到渠成技巧点拨:所谓自然结束式,是指把文章内容表达完了之后,自然而然地收束全文,而不去设计蕴意深刻的哲理语句,不去雕琢丰富的象征形体,以事情的终结作全文的结尾,干净利落,不枝不蔓。如《一堂有趣的科学课》是这样结局的:“下课铃声响了,当同学们恋恋不舍地放下手中的实验时,一个个不由自主地埋怨道:“怎么搞的,这节课时间这么短!”二、卒章显志画龙点睛技巧点拨:这种结尾方式,是指在文章结束时,以全文的内容为依托,运用简洁的语言,把主题思想明确地表达出来,或者在全文即将煞尾时,把写作意旨交待清,使文章中心鲜明突出。如一同学在写《承诺》时这样结尾:“无论在人生中会遇到什么样的困难,都永远不会放弃,做一个生活的强者——这就是我的承诺。”三、首尾呼应凸显主旨技巧点拨:首尾呼应是考场作文中最实用的方法之一,一般情况是作者先在开头提出文章的中心,然后在结尾时再次强调,照应开头,首尾遥相呼应,结构完整,浑然一体,从而使文章的中心鲜明突出,能唤起读者心灵上的美感。荆州中考满分文《把梦想带给花季》的开头和结尾(开头)“都说生活的船不能没有理想的帆,都说生活的理想就是为了理想的生活,而理想的生活中最快乐的时光,便是梦想的花季。(结尾)花季中,我希望自己能永远记住先哲的那句良训:生活的船不能没有理想的帆。生活的理想就是为了理想的生活。”《战胜自己》的开头和结尾:(开头):“善于战胜自己,这是我的长处。这个“自己”,是害怕困难缺少勇气的自己,成功时很得意洋洋的自己。 (结尾):善于战胜自己,这就是我的长处。困难前面不失掉信心,要有勇气战胜之:成功时不趾高气扬,要看到缺点,保持冷静的头脑。”四、引用佳句多姿多彩技巧点拨: 用名言、警句、诗句、俗语、歌词等收尾,洋溢着诗意,揭示着真谛,呈现出含意深刻的耐人寻味的内容,使之深深地印在读者的心中,意味深长。吉林省中考满分文《陶醉》的结尾:(“佐拉说:“人生——只有两分半种的时间,一分种微笑、一分种叹息、半分种的爱……”在我看来,在我陶醉于欣赏母亲的梳妆中,那一分钟的微笑不是勉强,那一分钟的叹息之后不再是叹息,而是爱的传递,母亲将她对生命的爱,对生活的爱,对亲人的爱融于平日的点滴中,我忘情天其中了…”)如一同学如此写《美好的明天》的结尾:(明日歌中说:“明日复明日,明日何其多,我生待明日,万事成蹉跎……”希望大家能把握今天,创造出美好的明天。)五、巧妙发问引人深思技巧点拨:一篇好的文章做到言有尽而意无穷,要具有哲理启发性。如同欣赏一支优美的乐曲,曲虽终但余音缭绕,给人留下无穷的韵昧。结尾以发问的形式提出问题,启发读者思考,具有感染、强调的作用,可谓言有尽而意无穷。如有同学这样写《我的语文老师》结尾:“难道我的语文老师不是一个称职的好老师吗?你见过这样的老师吗?”
再如:自然的色、自然的香、自然的味、自然的美,这一切都源于自然。自然是伟大的。是神奇的。它与生活是那么的近,那么的紧。品味自然,不就同品味生活了吗?六、联想引申多姿多彩技巧点拨:结尾展开联想,由此及彼,由表及里,使主题得到升华。如某同学写《花》的结尾:“多姿多彩的花朵在校园里尽情绽放,也在我的心里播下了种子……”七、抒发情感气势不凡技巧点拨:用抒情的方式收束文章,运用排比、比喻修辞,以优美的文字抒发内心真实情感,并配以适当的议论,使文章结尾气势不凡,强劲有力。能够表达作者心中的情愫,激起读者情感的波澜,引起读者的共鸣,给人以真实感、充足感。如吉林省中考满分文《花样年华》的结尾:“春光似海,青春如花。青春是美丽的,美丽的青春在于奋斗,在于拼搏。愿天下的人们都能让自己的青春绽放出花一样的馨香!”《公园里的秋色》:“啊!我爱那迷人的秋色,我爱秋姑娘送给大地妈妈的一件衣服——秋天。”八、景物烘托情景合一技巧点拨:采用描写景物结尾,如同欣赏一支优美的乐曲,曲虽终但余音缭绕,给人留下无穷的韵昧。如广州中考满分文《雨中品读》:“风停了,暴雨也结束了,太阳重新露出了笑容,两代人的那扇玻璃也被那片残阳熔化了。太阳在远处逐渐隐去,消失在一片晚霞中,两者混为一体,没有距离。” [ 这段结尾的特点十分突出,景物烘托的作用也很明显,小作者通过对雨后景物的描写暗示了两代人之间情感隔阂的消失,情与景有机地结合在了一起。含蓄隽永。余味无穷。 ]例如《雨季》的结尾:雨停了,阳光放射出他温柔的光芒,天空中出现了彩虹,犹如一座七彩的桥架在天宇,我心也变得纯洁、明净。九、启发思考意犹未尽技巧点拨:即作者用恰当的词语组织形成句子,结尾给读者留下思考余地,让人有所启迪,获得感悟,可谓情韵深厚。如一同学写的寓言《狐狸和乌鸦续》结尾:“乌鸦遇事不冷静思考,盲目听信狐狸,结果又上当了。”[这引起了读者的深深思考:不论做什么事,要学会冷静思考,明辨是非。]十、出人意料戛然而止技巧点拨:这种结尾不是按照故事情节的通常逻辑,来处理人物或事情的结局,而是用意想不到的结局戛然而止,让人在目瞪口呆之余,不禁感叹作者的奇思妙想、生活的千变万化。如某同学创造性地写《龟兔赛跑续》:正当乌龟为自己的聪明而夺得冠军沾沾自喜时,裁判宣布了一个令大家非常意外的结果——兔子赢了。原来,比赛的规则是比赛谁跑得慢。十一、含蓄深刻余味无穷技巧点拨:含蓄结尾写法,就是把要说的话、表达的真情隐藏起来,使文章结尾留有空白,常采用比喻、象征手法和空白艺术,耐人寻味,给人留下无穷的想象余地,使人浮想联翩,能把读者引向更深远的境地,有“余音绕梁,三日不绝”之奇效。如《挑山工》一文的结尾:从泰山回来,我画了一幅画——在陡直的似乎没有尽头的山道上,一个穿红背心的挑山工给肩头的重物压弯了腰,他一步一步向上登攀。这幅画一直挂在我的书桌前,多年来不曾换掉,因为我需要它。十二、升华主题揭示本质技巧点拨:所谓升华主题,就是在主题的基础上自然延伸,透过现象,揭示本质,丰富和深化主旨内涵,如《母亲》的结尾:“谁言寸草心,报得三春晖。”我的母亲就是这样一位无私的伟大的母亲。然而,她是我们千千万万劳动人民中的一员,正是这些劳动人民才创造了这个美丽世界。我们要发奋学习,将来用实际行动来报答祖国和人民。[作者将自己的个人感情和普通劳动人民系在一起,表达赞美之情,立意深远。]作文结尾方法千万,不管怎样落笔,都应与正文一线相生,不可缺痕。古人云:“结句当如撞钟,清音有余。”可见,文章的结尾关键要有丰富深厚的内容,经得起咀嚼,能启发读者想象和思考,达到“余音绕梁,三日不止”的境地。
范文八:好的申论文章结尾有三个基本标准,高分文章至少要达到其中一个:第一,深刻地总结全文;第二,把最精彩的话留在最后说;第三,要么给人以丰富有益的启示,要么给人以超凡的美的感受。要做到这种效果,可以把写好开头的技巧重复运用,因为开头和结尾的写法有相通之处,通常情况下是可以互换的,用写开头的写法写结尾,同样能够让结尾鲜活、为文章增色。在此,中公教育专家为考生介绍4种申论文章结尾的技巧:结尾技巧之一:言简意赅,总结全篇用简洁的文字、生动的语言,有力地总结全文主旨。强调指出,在某一领域或某一工作中,重点需要解决什么问题、怎样解决问题,解决问题具有怎样的现实意义或深远意义。示例:资源改革是应对资源危机和产业升级潮流的必然选择。推进煤炭资源整合重组,坚持以煤补林、以黑补绿,让黑色的矿山重新披满苍翠的绿衣,必将让华夏大地呈现一派勃勃的生机!结尾结构为:总结意义——重申对策——高亢抒情。结尾技巧之二:前后呼应,点题深化结尾扣题,呼应上文,强调开篇与正文主体所提出的问题,为何必须解决与怎样解决,概括解决的意义和能够产生的影响、效果,紧扣政策背景、联系本地或本职实际,目光深远,视野开阔,深化对全文主题的阐释与论述。示例:相信群众、依靠群众、敬畏群众并亲近群众,是我们处理复杂问题的根本,也是解决一切问题的力量来源。群众是我们党的力量源泉和胜利之本。没有一种根基,比扎根于人民更坚实;没有一种力量,比从群众中汲取更强大;没有一种执政资源,比赢得民意更珍贵持久。立足新的历史起点,始终保持与人民群众的血肉联系,始终坚持为人民群众的利益而奋斗,我们一定能以更加坚强的团结战胜前进道路上的一切艰难险阻,化解危机和矛盾,赢得群众信任,不断开创各项事业的新局面。结尾结构为:重申论点——排比升华——展望未来。结尾技巧之三:展望未来,抒情倡议以坚定有力的语气指明事物未来的发展方向、政策走向,问题必然解决、情况必然改善的趋势与前景,描绘蓝图,阐述事物能够在经济社会和群众心理等各方面产生的积极影响;以感叹句、陈述句、设问句等抒发感情,发出倡议,呼吁各级政府、社会各界、公众或干部个人遵循政策方向、响应改革号召,支持政府工作,自觉履行责任和义务等。示例:“落红不是无情物,化作春泥更护花。”花是如此,树更益人。森林是地球之肺,也是人类之肺的卫士。呵护森林健康,就是保护人类自身的健康。过去我们向这只肺索取良多,今后要用生态文明的意识和举措给予它更多的呵护,让地球之肺永葆活力,努力建设森林资源强国,让人民世世代代健康生活在这片美好家园!结尾结构为:引用诗词——推物及人——类比升华。结尾技巧之四:引用名言,烘托境界引用党和国家领导人或专家学者、经典名著中的权威论述,联系本文主题进行阐释论述,借题发挥,有引有阐,开掘文章的内涵思想,提升全文的理论层次,展现政策、道义高度与人文情怀,烘托文章的立意境界。示例:《礼记o学记》有教曰:“玉不琢,不成器;人不学,不知道。是故古之王者,建国君民,教学为先。”孟子也说:“幼吾幼,以及人之幼”。教育者应有公平之心,让每一所学校平等发展,对每一个学生平等看待。温家宝同志曾说,教育的目标就是让每一个孩子有学上、上好学,这是政府的重要职责。人民对政府办教育的期待是无止境的,政府要切实履行这个职责,与教育者一道,推进改革创新,促进教育资源均衡配置,让公平的阳光照进教育领域的每一个角落,切实实现每一个孩子上好学的目标!结尾结构为:引用名句——阐释讲话——呼吁升华。
范文九:山西人事考试网2014年山西省公务员考试申论技巧:三种申论文章结尾山西人事考试网,为给位考试精心整理了2014年山西省公务员考试备考资料。希望为迎战2014年山西省考的各位考试提供帮助,祝各位考生在2014年山西省公务员考试中获得优异的成绩,取得自己理想的职位。申论技巧:结尾是申论文章的重要组成部分,好的文章要有好的结尾,好的结尾可以给文章增色不少。在结尾时可以总结文章观点也可升华论点。下面中公教育专家给大家介绍几种结尾写法:一、意义型结尾。结尾表达主题的重要性,也表明实现目的的信心和对未来的美满设想。示例:江泽民同志曾高屋建瓴指出:“创新是一个民族兴旺发达的不竭动力”。只有扎扎实实培养创新观念、锻造创新人才并积极参与国际竞争,才能提升自主创新能力,推动产业结构升级,登上世界产业链的最高峰,创造出高品质的中国品牌形象!二、主题型结尾。结尾再次强调问题或现状的紧迫性,表明有信心解决。示例:网络的发展给社会带来了很大的便利,而网络谣言的传播却给整个网络秩序的和谐稳定以及社会的和谐健康发展带来了很大的危害。所以一定要在源头上、流程上遏制网络谣言的传播,对传播网络谣言的行为绝不姑息、严惩不贷,全力净化网络环境,保障网络的健康运行。三、建议型。提出解决问题的对策并发出号找,增强文章感染力。示例:知识改变命运。解决大学生就业难就是在给人们保留一个稳定的改变命运的通道,就应该以各种保障和政策改进让人们继续坚持这个理念而不是轻易改变和丢弃这个理念。这需要就业环境的公平,需要高效培养的科学,也需要社会生产方式的转化和升级。只有只争朝夕地应对,和有条不紊的推进,大学生就业难才不至于颠覆人们“知识改变命运”的信念。山西中公网提供山西人事考试网信息、山西公务员考试公告、山西公务员面试、山西公务员培训等的公务员考试网站。山西中公网提供山西公务员考试真题,是山西最权威、最受考生欢迎的山西公务员考试网。太原中公教育(/)TEL:网站:地址:太原高新区动力港二层
范文十:众多的文章,结尾形式千变万化,不拘一格。然而,不管哪一种都要与文章紧密相连,切不可游离于主题之外。现介绍几种常用的结尾样式,供同学们欣赏借鉴。一、自然收束式叙事过程一路向前渐近式发展,高潮过后,至结尾处自然收束,无丝毫做作。这是文章结尾样式中最普遍最常用的一种,简便易学。请看下面几个结尾片断:1、这一年秋天,她们学会了射击。冬天打夹鱼的时候,她们一个个登在流星一样的冰船上来回警戒。敌人“围剿”那百顷大苇塘的时候,她们配合子弟兵作战,出入在那芦苇的海里。(孙犁《荷花淀》)2、从此,陈奂生一直很神气,做起事来,比以前有劲得多了。(高晓声《陈奂生上城》)3、当下王嬷嬷与鹦哥陪侍在碧纱橱内。宝玉之乳母李嬷嬷,并大丫鬟名唤袭人者,陪侍在外面大床上。(曹雪芹《林黛玉进贾府》)4、孔明曰:“吾非为马谡而哭。吾想先帝在白帝城临危之时,曾嘱吾曰:马谡言过其实,不可大用。今果应此言,乃深恨己之不明,追思先帝之言,因此痛哭耳!”大小将士,无不流涕。(《三国演义·失街亭》)这四个结尾,都是故事发展至终点的一个自然收束,即在该收尾时收尾,并无机关玄妙暗藏其中,这种方式希望同学们练一练。二、前后呼应式这种方式是将开头或正文内容中其他文字在结尾处再现,从而收到内容形式上前后照应。请看下面的例子:开头:这几天心里颇不宁静。今晚在院子里乘凉……妻在屋里拍着闰儿,迷迷糊糊地哼着眠歌。我悄悄地披了大衫,带上门出去。结尾:这样想着,猛一抬头,不觉已是自己门前;轻轻地推门进去,什么气息都没有,妻已睡熟好久了。(朱自清《荷花淀》)开头:夏日夜晚,黑色渐渐沉下来主宰了大地。不知不觉,一轮金黄的圆月升上了天空“月上柳梢头,人约黄昏后。”爸爸一板一眼地吟着古诗正领着儿子女儿出来纳凉呢。结尾:在空中,一轮圆月依旧。《梧桐树下》这两篇文章的结尾分别用“妻已睡熟了”和“一轮圆月依旧”与开头相关内容呼应,从而使行文严谨。三、急峰陡转式这种样式的结尾与行文内容形成突然逆转,使读者倍感惊奇,极具吸引力。这种结尾需要作者精巧的构思,与众不同的情节设计。莫泊桑的《项链》在结尾时,玛蒂尔德发现项链是假的,这一情节大大出乎人们的预料,使文章批判性骤然加深。《警察与赞美诗》中作者欧·亨利故意设置了欲改过自新的苏比因误会被警察抓进监狱这一结局,进一步增强了文章的戏剧性,使人笑过之后倍感辛酸。请阅读下面文段,体会此种结尾的好处。“这么小的房子只给我两间?”军医李静忿忿地说。她想,要是爸爸(确切地说是公公)还是这儿的政委,或者她在“老头子”离休前就调到这儿来,他们怎么敢给这样两间破房子?营房管理员是个老实巴交的小伙子。李静想,这种人好对付,来点硬的就吓住了。“我的要求并不过分。”她傲慢地仰起那张很漂亮的面孔,“把我爸爸过去的房子分给我一半就行啦。”“那……”年轻的营房管理员挠挠头发,指着那两间屋子问,“您要哪一间呢?”“什么意思?”李静冷冷地盯住他。“老政委过去住的就是这两间。”(赵曙光《只要一半》)此文结尾出乎预料,又在情理之中。这种突转式结尾是在女主人误解的前提下发展而来的。一是对公公生前情况不了解,认为像公公那样的高官应该享有某种特殊待遇;二是认为公公离休,别人不会再重视她的要求。在这种误解下,突转式结尾就颇耐人寻味了。四、含蓄深思式文章忌直白,这是一贯的要求,记叙文尤是如此,含蓄深思式结尾能给人留下广阔的思考空间,有利于主旨的加深与拓展。(一)多年来我头一次意识到,这园中不单是处处都有过我的车辙,有过我的车辙的地方也都有过母亲的脚印。(史地生·《我与地坛》)(二)这样的故事发生在过去,也发生在现在,不过将来(我们希望)这样的事不再发生了。(三)虽然我们埋葬了别里科夫,可是这种装在套子里的人,却还有许多,将来也还不知道有多少呢!(契诃夫《装在套子里的人》)(四)这人间的灯光是不会灭的。(巴金的《灯》)提示:《我与地坛》的结尾让人在平淡的记叙中感到的是史地生对母亲深深地热爱与歉疚。文章虽然结束,但这份情感是永不消逝的;《宽容·序言》的结尾展开的是对社会历史发展规律的思索;《装在套子里的人》让人感到沙皇专制之深之重,变革社会绝非易事;这里巴金在驱散了心中的无助与困惑后,他笑了,这笑包含了他对生活的希望与追求,也包含了他对胜利的向往与坚信。结尾的样式有很多,不仅限于上面谈到的这些,关于到底使用什么样的结尾,要依文章内容表达的需要而定,切不可千篇一律。

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