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标题：【2016年高考真题 四川卷】The Season I Like Best
字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字 &
&&满分: 100&
&要求：某中学生英文报正举办“&The Season I Like
Best”&的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：1.&&&&你最喜欢的季节；2.&&&&你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、&感受……）。
注意：1.&&&&词数100左右；2.&&&&题目已为你写好；3.&&&&行文连贯，语篇完整；
​The Season I
& &I like winter
It lasts from December to
February.&It is the coldest season in
the year.&In winter, the days are
very short.&When it comes the leaves
fall from the trees.Winter is
beautiful.&Snowflakes swing in the
sky.&The rivers are stopping
flowing.The ground is covered with a layer of
snow.&The snow looks like smoking,
because it's white.&It likes a piece
of paper.&In winter, we can make
snowman and play in the snow.&We can
have winter holiday.&Winter makes me
refreshingly.Although very cold but it has
incomparable warmth and hope because next festival is
&&That's why I like winter.
作文评分 &
&排名：第135(共264)，最高分:91.5，最低分:10.5
&作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
标题：【初一】【日常练习】描述一家人的活动
字数: 不低于50字并且不高于100 字 &
要求：&现在是星期天上午，假设你是Tom，请根据下面表格内容的提示，写一篇50词左右的短文，描述一下你们一家人的活动，可适当发挥。
On Sunday morning.&Tom is
doing his homework and the homework is
difficult.&Mary is Tom's
sister.&She is playing computer games
and she feels happy.&Their father and
grandfather are playing chess and they all play chess
well.Mother and grand mother are talking each other
and they forget it's time for cook lunch now.
​作文评分： &
&排名：第36(共100)，最高分:90，最低分:1.5
​评语：&&但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；衔接成分偏少。
​标题：【初一】【日常练习】Computers
in My Life
字数: 不低于50字并且不高于100 字
&&满分: 100
要求：请参考下面的词汇，以Computers&in&my&life为题写一篇短文。词数不少于60。
​Computers in
Computers are new things in
people'life.&But it's an interesting
thing in my life, I can read much information on the
Internet.&I can read many books on
the Internet.&I always download some
software on the Internet.&The
Internet is a good thing, and computer is a good thing.
​作文评分: &85.5 &
&&排名：第30(共54)，最高分:94.5，最低分:0
​评语：&&若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累高级词汇；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。
标题：【初一作文】The Spring Festival
&&字数: 不低于50字并且不高于200 字
满分: 100 &要求：请写一篇以“The Spring
Festival”为话题的作文。不得少于80字。
​The Spring
The most important Chinese festival of the year is Spring
Festival.&It's the first day of the
lunar year.
People are very happy in Spring Festival because they can
have large dinners and watch special programs on TV with the
family.&People always visit their
Parents always give money to other kids and child can
receive much money.
​作文评分：82 &
&排名：第68(共130)，最高分:94.5，最低分:25
​评语：&文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
标题：【初一】【日常练习】地图介绍字数:
不低于70字并且不高于100 字
满分: 100 &&要求：&这是你家附近的社区地图，请介绍这些公共场所的位置。
&This&is&the&map&of&my&neighborhood.&
​Map
This is the map of my neighborhood.
There is a hospital near the Beijing
Road.&I always get
there.&The supermarket is near the
hospital.&This is the only one
supermarket of my neighborhood.&There
is a zoo in front of the hospital.&I
never go to the zoo.&A post office in
front of the supermarket, I never send letters so I never get
there.There is a library between the zoo and the post
office.&I often get there after
作文评分 &&80.5 &
&排名：第9(共27)，最高分:93，最低分:7
评语：正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量。
标题：【初一作文】My online friend &字数: 不低于50字并且不高于200
要求：根据中文提示，介绍你的一位网友，以“My online friend ________”为题，写一篇短文要求:①短文不少于10句话& &
&&②文中须包括所有提示的内容，每个方面都可适当加以想象发挥。&
&&③语句通顺连贯1）学习:&尖子生、最喜欢的学科2）生活：常吃/从不吃/很少吃……（选两个方面表述）、每周锻炼……3）穿着：穿……很酷、 ……很配……4）爱好：擅长……、是……的一员
online friend Jack
Today I will tell you about my online friend
Jack is a good student because he usually sends some good
book menu and he always sends me some photos about his test
paper.&He likes math best because he
sends books about math.&He likes
eating meat and suger because it's good for
brains.&He never eats junk
food.&He always dressed
black.&He thinks that's cool he likes
playing decode games and he is one of the inference
​作文评分
&&排名：第18(共68)，最高分:94.5，最低分:57.5
​&评语：文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
标题：【初一】【日常练习】拒绝邀请信
字数: 不低于50字并且不高于100 字 &满分: 100
要求：假如你是Peter,你的朋友Tom&邀请你周末一起去野炊，但是你的日程已经排满。请根据提示写一封信，说明你不能去的理由。示：have&a&picnic,&at&the&weekend,&have&a&piano&lesson,&on&Sunday&morning,play&basketball,go&to
&a&party,&go&shopping,revise(复习)&for&the&English&test
&Thanks&for&your&invitation.&I’m&sorry.&_______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
​第494729号书信
Thanks to your
invitation.&I'm
sorry.&I have many things to do and I
have no time to have a picnic with you
I have a piano lesson and I have to play basketball with
my father on Saturday.&And I have to
revise for the English test on Saturday
evening.&I must go to a party of my
friend and go shopping on Sunday.&So
I can't go for you.
​作文评分
&&排名：第19(共34)，最高分:87，最低分:0
​评语：正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；语言不流畅。
标题：【初一】【日常练习】We Want to Be_____When We Grow up
字数: 不低于60字并且不高于80 字
&&满分: 100
要求：提示：同学们，长大后你最想从事哪几种职业？说出你和你的朋友们最想从事的职业并陈述理由。以We
want to be…. when we grow up.为题，写一篇短文。要求：1. 请先把题目补充完整。2.
根据提示写一篇短文，词数在60~80个；3. 意思连贯、语言流畅、符合情理、书写规范、卷面整洁；4.
文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名和班级名称，否则以零分计。
​We want to
be different jobs when we grow up
Today I will tell you about my classmate's
Lucy wants to be a teacher because she likes teaching
students and punishing student that she feels very
happy.&About thirteen students wants
to be a teacher too.&Vince wants to
be a businessman because he likes
money.&I want to be an actor or a
speaker because I like to act and speak for people.
​作文评分&86
&&排名：第25(共64)，最高分:95.5，最低分:21
​评语：单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰。
标题：【初一作文】My best friend一一Simon
字数: 不低于50字并且不高于100 字 &满分: 100
要求：请根据以下中文提示，以My&best&friend一一Simon为题，用英语写一篇短文.词数在90个左右。要点如下:
1.&&Simom今年12岁，是南京人，但现在和家人住在宜兴。
2.他留着短发，看起来又高又强壮。
3.擅长数学和英语。
4.他是我们学校篮球队的一名成员，他的篮球打得很棒。
5.我们放学后经常打篮球口我们都很喜欢他.
friend一一Simon
I had a friend name's Simon and he was my best friend two
years ago.
He is twelve years old and he lives in NanJing before he
left our school.&He lives in YiXing
now.&He looks tall and strong with
black short hair.&He is one of our
school basketball teams and he also is a good
student.&He is good at math and
English and he doesn't like
cooking.&We all play basketball with
him after school and we all like him.
​作文评分 &79.5 &排名：第155(共321)，最高分:94.5，最低分:5
​&评语：文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章层次较为清晰。
标题：A Meaningful Tree Planting Day
字数: 不低于70字并且不高于120 字 &满分: 100
要求：根据下面5个要点内容，写一段话，讲述他们的这次春游：（开头已给出）
1. 早上9点集合，坐校车去山区植树
2. 自带植树工具和小树苗
3. 到达之后，有的学生挖洞，有的放树苗，有的浇水
4.下午完工后，回到学校
5. 非常有意义的一次春游
On the Tree Planting Day, the students in Class 10 had a spring
​A Meaningful
Tree Planting Day
They got together at 9:00 and got to mountains area by
school bus.&They had tools and
saplings by themselves.&At the
mountain area, some students were digging holes for planting
saplings and some students were planted saplings.Some
students were watering
saplings.&Planting sapling is a heavy
work but there are lots of students planting because it's
fun.&After that, they went to school
and had a class about plants.
It's a meaningful trip.
​作文评分 &87
&&排名：第17(共35)，最高分:95.5，最低分:18.5
​&评语：若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；可适当增加连接词和衔接。
​标题：【初一作文】【日常练习】Tai Ge and Li
字数: 不低于60字并且不高于500 字 &满分: 100
​要求：一批美国的孩子到你家乡的光明动物园来参观熊猫和老虎。假如你是一名志愿解说者，请根据以下内容提示给远道而来的客人做个解说吧。狮子（Tai
Ge）：来自吉林省，4岁，有点懒，喜欢吃肉（meat）。熊猫（Li
Li）：来自四川省，3岁，害羞，喜欢吃竹子（bamboo）和睡觉。
Tai Ge and Li Li
Look at this everyone!
It's Tai Ge, a tiger, and it comes from
JiLin.&It's four years old, and it's
a little lazy and it likes eating
meat.&But it is very
dangerous.&Look!
That is Li Li, a panda, and it comes from
Sichuan.&It's three years old and
it's shyer than other pandas.&It
likes having h bamboo and sleeping just like the other
&排名：第25(共54)，最高分:91，最低分:29.5
​评语：&简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；文章层次较为清晰。
标题：【初一作文】【期中考试】Your School
字数: 不低于60字并且不高于500 字 &满分: 100
要求：现在是一名中学生的你，正在美丽漂亮的学校里学习生活,在老师的关怀和同学陪伴中成长，请你用英文描述一下你的学校生活。提示词：1.There
playground&&2.friendly&&3.useful&要求：条理清楚,
语言表达准确，行文连贯，段落分明, 书写整洁规范，60词左右。
Our school is big and beautiful.
There are many trees that the school's colour is green in
the play ground.&My classmates are
friendly and outgoing just like our teachers that I'm very happy
because I can make many new
friends.&All of our subjects are
interesting that I'm enjoying my school life and my favourite
subject is useful.&I love my school
​作文评分 &83.5 &排名：第118(共523)，最高分:96，最低分:0
​评语：单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；文章组织结构良好；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短。
标题：我的叔叔
字数: 不低于80字并且不高于120 字 &满分: 100&
​要求：假设你是林峰。请根据下面的内容提示，用英语向大家介绍你做中式厨师的叔叔林涛。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
& 1、外貌：又高又壮，留着黑色短发；
& 2、爱好：下厨和运动；
& 3、特长：做好看又好吃的中国菜；
& 4、你的想法：......
& Today I want to talk about my uncle Lin
I'm Lin Feng.&Today I will
talk about my uncle Lin Tao.
He is the tallest in my family but a little strong with
black short hair.&He is
fun.He likes cooking and doing sports, and he usually
cooks himself because he wants to cook beautiful and taste Chinese
food.&I think he is funny because he
isn't at all cook well.&We really
hope he can cook that we can have some delicious.
​作文评分 &78.5
&&排名：第38(共83)，最高分:89.5，最低分:25.5
​评语：希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
标题：【初一】【日常练习】Jim’s Day
字数: 不低于60字并且不高于100 字
要求：&根据Jim的作息时间写一篇短文，题目为Jim’s Day
要求：1.写标题 & 2.使用所给的词汇 &
3.字数不少于60字 & 4.字迹工整
​Jim's
Jam has a busy day.
He gets up at 6:00 and he runs around the playground at
6:30 before he has breakfast at
7:00.&When he does his homework, it's
7:30.&The school starts at 8:00, so
he goes to school at 7:45.&He has
lunch at school because somebody catches him to the school dining
He plays soccer very well and teacher let his class play
soccer.&When time is 5:00, he
finishes his fourth soccer match.&He
has dinner at 6:20 before he buys some toys and a postcard when he
has a new pen pal.&He goes to bed at
​作文评分&85.5
&&排名：第10(共125)，最高分:94.5，最低分:5
​评语：希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
标题：【初一作文】【期末考试】Introduce Bll
字数: 不低于60字并且不高于500 字
假设Bill是你最好的朋友，请你根据表格中的信息，写一篇短文介绍一下Bill。。
姓名 Bill 年龄 13
玩电子游戏和打篮球&能力：唱歌，弹钢琴&到校时间：早上7：40&
放学时间：下午4:30&到校方式：乘公共汽车&从家到学校：&
Bill is my best friend if he doesn't leave this city, now
he is my second best friend, we all e-mail to each
Bill is thirteen years
old.&He always plays computer games
at his home with his friends include me and I always play
basketball in the gym with my friends includes
him.&He is good at singing song even
he isn't at all singing well and he is also good at playing piano
and he plays very well.&He usually
gets to school by bus at 7:40 and he goes home at 4:30, his home is
about 10 kilometres from school.
作文评分 &
& &排名：第4(共63)，最高分:91.5，最低分:28.5
​评语：作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
标题：【初一】【日常练习】My Busy Weekend
字数: 不低于60字并且不高于120 字
观察下面六幅图片，请以“My busy
weekend，描述一下周末里的活动。&&&&
要求：时态正确、语言流畅；60词左右。
My busy weekend
I was very busy last weekend that I am so tired
In the morning, I woke up on the right side of the bed and
stayed on the bed about five minutes before I washed my face or
brushed my teeth.&I finished my
homework before I play computer game and I had my lunch in front of
the computer desk.&I visited my
girlfriend and played with her that she was unhappy because I hurt
her leg.&In the evening I sang songs
with my family that I was very unhappy because they not at all sang
songs.&I watched my favourite program
but that program is't on show.
On the whole, my last weekend was very busy and
作文评分&88
&&排名：第10(共127)，最高分:94.5，最低分:12
评语：采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累.
​标题：学校生活
字数: 不低于70字并且不高于120 字
假设你是林涛，你想给你的朋友Nick发一份邮件，说说你的学校生活，要点如下：
①你通常早上7:30上学。
②上午上四节课，下午上两节课。
③在学校吃午饭，午饭之后喜欢散步。
④放学之后喜欢踢足球或打排球，因为运动对人有益。(注意格式)
第647958号书信
Today I will tell you about my school life.
I usually get up at
6:00.&When I finish my breakfast I
usually do exercises before I go to
school.&I have four lessons
interested in the morning, and I take a walk in the school after I
have lunch at school.&When I finish
my afternoon's two interesting lessons I usually play football or
volleyball, because exercises are good for people.
​作文评分
&&排名：第17(共98)，最高分:88，最低分:4.5
​评语：文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
标题：【初一作文】【期末考试】Self-introduction
字数: 不低于50字并且不高于500 字
仔细阅读下面的表格，根据表格内容写一篇自我介绍。&要求：1、书写工整规范，无勾抹。&2、陈述要包括表格中所有内容。
3、字数50词左右。
First Name: Alice&Last Name: Brown
Age （年龄） :& 11
Class: Eight
Family members （成员）:&&Father:
Frank Brown （A reporter记者） Mother: Jane Brown （An English teacher）
Brother: Tony Brown （A student）
Today I will tell you something about me.
My name is Alice Brown, and I'm eleven years
old.&I must be a student because of
my parents that I'm very unhappy.&I'm
in class eight grades seven.Our class is the best
class in our grade that my teacher and my parents are proud of
us.&My father's name is Frank Brown,
a reporter.&Because he is a reporter,
when I quarrel with him, he always
wins.&My mother's name is Jane Brown,
my teacher and my English teacher, yeah, she is our class's
teacher, the culprit of I has to be a
student.&I have a little brother
name's Tony Brown.
​作文评分 &88.5 &排名：第9(共96)，最高分:94.5，最低分:15
​评语：句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
标题：【初一作文】介绍你的朋友
字数: 不低于50字并且不高于100 字
请根据下列内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你的朋友。
&&&&1.&&Daniel是我最好的朋友之一。他待人友善，擅长运动.
&&&&2.在学校，他学习努力，常常做运动;放学后，他有时听听音乐。音乐和运动都让他感觉很棒。
&&&&3.他最喜欢的运动是篮球，是校篮球队的成员。
4.他想要未来(in&the&future)成为一名国家队(the&national&team)的队员，我希望他能….
1.内容须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，
2.第4要点的内容须用1至2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥;
3.词数60个左右。
​My friend
Daniel is my best friend.&He
is friendly and smart, and he is good at basketball and he plays
basketball well.&He studies hard at
school and he studies well.&After
school, usually he listens to music or playing
basketball.&He wants to be a
basketball player of the national team in the future, I really hope
he can finish his dream.
​作文评分 &86.5 &排名：第99(共926)，最高分:96，最低分:0
​评语：句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。
标题：【初一作文】【期末考试】One Day
字数: 不低于60字并且不高于500 字
请你以时间顺序简要介绍你一天的生活（包括起床、吃早餐、上学、中餐、放学、游戏、回家、吃饭、作业及睡觉等）。要求：1、字数：60左右&&&&&&
2、能基本表述上面的内容。&&&&&&
3、书写规范，语言生动，准确无误。&&&&&&
4、用第一人称表述。（不得出现本人或学校的真实名字）
Today I will tell you my life.
I usually wake up at 6:00 and I will stay on the bed about
five minutes.&Then I will wash my
face and brush my teeth.&Then I have
my breakfast.&After breakfast, I will
read some books loudly and I go to school by bike at
6:35.&I have five classes in the
morning and they are all
interested.&I have my lunch at
home.Then I have three classes in the
afternoon.&We have three self-study
classes after 7:00.&At 9:20, we can
go home.&I eat dinner when I get home
and I sleep when I finish my eating.
​作文评分 &80
&&排名：第86(共165)，最高分:92，最低分:13
​评语：从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。
PS:第一周的两篇作文暂时找不到了，我会尽快补上
第二周作文：
典范作文：
Be celebrity
I don't want to be celebrity because it's too noisy. Maybe it's
fun and feels great, but I want to live in a place be quite
However, being famous has its negative side and, sometimes, it
may be destructive. The biggest problem is that they'll lose
freedom. Being famous always means being known to most people. So
they can't go shopping, walking in the park, even they can't go
outside without others' help and protect. Another trouble is that
famous people have no privacy. Paparazzi try to photograph them all
the time. People stop them in the street, asking for an autograph.
Fame exposes everything of one person to the public. What he does
and what he says will always topics chatted about. What's worse, to
singers or actors, they have to meet the public expectations and
fit in the public image. They can't be what they want to be.
Perhaps that is why someone says that fame is a heavy burden.
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作文评分题目要求
79 还可以继续修改完善
评语： 可适当增加从句和长句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；文章层次较为清晰。
1单元过关测试2作文：
How to keep healthy?
& Nowadays middle school students' physical
fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.
The most important, many students are eating junk food and don't do
exercises. That's why students are getting thin and unhealthy. So,
how can we become healthy?
First we must eat healthily. We should eat meat, vegetables,
fruit and other kinds of food. Taking exercises is also very
important, it can help us to build a strong body. If you don't like
sports you can walk for half an hour after meals.
Secondly we must stay happy all the time. I think making friends
is one of the best ways to help us to stay happy. Because when you
are with your friends, you can share your happiness with them, or
you can tell them of your worries. Then you will be happy soon.
74 还可以继续修改完善
评语： 文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构较为严谨。
Pearl Do I like pearl?
Yes, I do.
Firstly, she is contemptible but she can use advantage by
herself. She had the best magic carpet in the school. The carpet
belongs to her. She can use it. Just like you study not well but
you have a good pen, even the pen comes from the teacher.
Secondly, she can steal the test paper, that's proved she can
steal under teacher's eyes, only she studies well that can she
steal the test paper.
Thirdly, Law of the Jungle, culling the Weak, so if Jem had
enough money or enough strong, he can use Pearl's carpet certainly.
Or he can fix up his broken magic carpet before he had a crash.
In sum up, Pearl was shrewd and jem is clumsy.
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作文评分 题目要求
句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Tim and Tom Tim and Tom are twins,
and Tim was born faster than Tom about five minutes, so Tim is
Tom's big brother.
They are the same, because of their father, they are all like
playing football. Their mother is a doctor. So they can't eat junk
food or too much meat. And their big sister is a professor. So they
have to be good a student.
They have many differences too. Tim is naughty but Tom is quiet.
Tim likes going on vacation but Tom likes staying at home. How
funny twins they are!
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评语： 正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；文中衔接词丰富。
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